1. Nice. Let me offer some tweaks.
    First bullet: don’t just measure the activity, measure the impact.
    2. excellent
    3. let me suggest a bias in this balance: organizations listen, individuals speak.
    4, 5, 6. right on.
    7. I suggest somehow making this factual statement into an actionable one. Just like #2 implies a fact, but becomes a precondition, so too this one should be a precondition. When something impacts an internal process then . What has to be in place to make that work?

    Hope this helps!

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